[identity profile] macklingirl.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] doppelleben_ci5
Heute, wo es nicht mehr so heiß ist, gibt es eine wirklich heiße Geschichte. Und zwar One Night in Bangkok by LilyK

Die Geschichte an sich ist heiß, in der Geschichte ist es heiß und die Protagonisten sind auch ganz schön heiß. Also eine wirklich heiße Angelegenheit. ;-)

Was mir an der Geschichte gefällt ist schnell erzählt. Zum einen ist sie h/c, zum anderen eine nette First Time und zum dritten dennoch spannend.

Es gibt einen tollen Anfang, bei dem ich sofort ein sexy Bild von einem halbnackten Bodie vor Augen hatte,

>"Bloody hell," he muttered, dragging the vest over his head and throwing it across the room, where it landed on the floor after hitting the wall. Glaring at the inanimate object, he leaned back and let out a small sigh of relief when the bit of cooler air blowing from a nearby fan hit his over-heated body.

He settled back and rubbed the icy condensation from his cold glass of water across his forehead.
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zwischendurch bekommen wir es mit Eis-Erotik zu tun :-),

>Hiding a pleased smile, Bodie picked up the glass of water he'd forgotten about and sipped the cold liquid. "God, that's good." Dipping his fingers into the glass, he trailed them across his neck and down his chest. "I'm so bloody hot." Bodie fished out an ice cube and wiped it down his chest, sighing with pleasure. He slid the icy block across his nipple, almost shivering at the sudden coldness. The tightening nub made him grit his teeth, and with as much innocence as he could muster, he raised his head to observe Doyle.

Doyle's eyes were firmly locked on Bodie's fingers.

The melting cube left a trail of cool sweetness, and the resulting water drops skimmed down Bodie's chest toward the waistband of his tracksuit bottoms. Smiling to himself, he continued to move the cube across his skin and up to the hollow of his throat where he wiped the last of the tiny shard of ice up and across his neck. Then, with the palm of his hand, he stroked his chest, spreading the water. Breaking the silence, he finally said, "Wish that fan was working. It would feel really nice having the breeze blowing across my body. Did you know that the effect of the water evaporating makes your skin feel very cool?"

Bodie watched as Doyle swallowed and seemed to have a bit of trouble looking away from Bodie's chest. "Eh?"

Bodie laughed, tickled at the response from his friend. Doyle looked dazed as he blinked slowly, and when his partner shifted in his seat, Bodie knew that Doyle's body was reacting to his wanton display. Keeping his tone casual, he asked, "Sip?" as he held out the glass, condensation dripping down the sides and onto his leg.<


es gibt eine nette First Time (die ich hier nicht zitiere, schließlich sollt ihr lesen ;-)

Und am Ende kommt die Spannung mit dem Attentäter, den die Autorin über die Hitzewelle und die First Time dann doch nicht vergessen hat.

Wenn man, während man die Geschichte liest, dann noch die passende Musik dazu hört, dann ist es für mich einfach perfekt.

So, was sagt ihr zu der Geschichte? Hat sie euch gefallen oder war sie nicht euer Geschmack? Ich würde mich über Kommentare wirklich freuen.
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