Bodie is called by a hurt Doyle, who was visiting Ripon with his girl friend Mary. Bodie drives to Ripon ( - artwork) and finds the Cricket Club Doyle talked about. Doyle had a hit on his head and tells Bodie that Mary wasn't kidnapped or hurt. She seemed to have disappeared.
In this moment Mary reappears from the cricket garden with a weapon and since she is a a bit of a poser she tells them (before wanting to shoot them) that the Ripon Cricket Club is a centre for drug smuggling and she is managing it.
She prefers women and tells Doyle he was just bearable.
Now the second women, Sue, arrives from the garden, and it becomes clear that they are a couple. At last Doyle throws a hidden cricket ball upon Mary's head and Bodie wrestles down Sue.
Rays last sentence in my story is: "Mary and Sue: two women the world doesn't need."
Well - I'm not very good at creating plots, there are some holes in it. I am better at writing more comical, weird or slapstick stories...
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Bodie is called by a hurt Doyle, who was visiting Ripon with his girl friend Mary. Bodie drives to Ripon ( - artwork) and finds the Cricket Club Doyle talked about. Doyle had a hit on his head and tells Bodie that Mary wasn't kidnapped or hurt. She seemed to have disappeared.
In this moment Mary reappears from the cricket garden with a weapon and since she is a a bit of a poser she tells them (before wanting to shoot them) that the Ripon Cricket Club is a centre for drug smuggling and she is managing it.
She prefers women and tells Doyle he was just bearable.
Now the second women, Sue, arrives from the garden, and it becomes clear that they are a couple.
At last Doyle throws a hidden cricket ball upon Mary's head and Bodie wrestles down Sue.
Rays last sentence in my story is: "Mary and Sue: two women the world doesn't need."
Well - I'm not very good at creating plots, there are some holes in it. I am better at writing more comical, weird or slapstick stories...